Zi Brown

Pit Stop

by Zi Brown

Creative Commons Wednesday December 2, 2015

827 views | 84 comments

Filed in Horror & Drama

Radio

Radio: The National Weather Service has issued an alert. A blizzard is expected in next 4 hours.

I must spend the night at the next pit stop.

2 HOURS LATER

Oh, hey there, chum!

Hey!

Yer the first customer since, like, forever, eh! What's yer name, and what can I get ya?

I am Shawn! Its a blizzard out there so can I spend the night here?

Thank you!

Sure chum. Me name is Colin. Grab a seat.

Tell ya what, yer first drink's on me, eh!

Here ya go!

Well... ya see, we always wanted to run a pit stop, me and me wife.

So wheres your wife now?

But somebody's got to keep the business running, see.

She left this cursed place, early on. Nobody ever comes in, and when things get too bad, people leave.

Oh, don't be sorry, lad. It's for the better.

I am sorry to hear that.

Okay chum, bed's upstairs. There's food in the pantry; help yerself.

Now, if you'll excuse me, I'll be making a move,

3 BEERS, a WINE BOTTLE AND A sANDWHICH LATER...

Something's not right here.

Hey wait!

Sorry chum.

OPEN THE GOD DARN DOOR, COLIN

Why are you doing this?

Remember what I said about the place being cursed? Well... somebody has to stay back to run the business.

AFTER 15 YEARS.... I AM FREE !

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Zi Brown

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84 comments | 32 people | 3 languages | 11 countries

Danae.

Danae. 4 yrs ago from United States

aww

Danae.

Danae. 4 yrs ago from United States

I read a book like this once.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

cool. Thanks.

Rigo's comix

Rigo's comix 4 yrs ago from Indonesia

pffffffffffhahahahahahhahahahahaha!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

LOL

Baldur is a sheep

Baldur is a sheep 4 yrs ago from Denmark

what a f***ing @$#%!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

‎ಠ_ಠ

aisha12

aisha12 4 yrs ago from United States

Congratulations!!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you Aisha.

aisha12

aisha12 4 yrs ago from United States

Your welcome

Happy :)

Happy :) 4 yrs ago from United States

Congratulations!! :D

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you and congrats to you too.

Happy :)

Happy :) 4 yrs ago from United States

You're welcome and thanks!

AJ-Ka

AJ-Ka 4 yrs ago from United States

O.O wha~ amazing Sir Zi!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thank you sir JH555

-lilia-

-lilia- 4 yrs ago from France

Bravo tu a gagner!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

merci.

-lilia-

-lilia- 4 yrs ago from France

De rien ^-^

HOLA(I)

HOLA(I) 4 yrs ago from United States

Haha funny I loved it!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you.

HOLA(I)

HOLA(I) 4 yrs ago from United States

yw.

Endor

Endor 4 yrs ago from United States

And then the blizzard came and Colton froze to death. The end.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

yes thats a logical outcome!

Thanks you for reading.

aisha12

aisha12 4 yrs ago from United States

Voted

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you Aisha.

aisha12

aisha12 4 yrs ago from United States

your welcome

1000things

1000things 4 yrs ago from India

Good read indeed...intesresting story, awesomely told...

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks so much!

siregalahad

siregalahad 4 yrs ago from United States

Yikes!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks for reading.

dark saint

dark saint 4 yrs ago from United States

voted ;)

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you.

what_a_story

what_a_story 4 yrs ago from Poland

Nice story to read. But .... isn't the blizzard going to bury the bartender?

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you, Yes he will survive only if he is lucky enough.

Karma is a beach. lol

-Kate-

-Kate- 4 yrs ago from United States

Somehow, I suspected that. Nevertheless, it was extremely well written, and your background making skills are prime.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you so much Kate. Zi is happy you like it.

aisha12

aisha12 4 yrs ago from United States

Plot twist! Amazing as always.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you Aisha.

aisha12

aisha12 4 yrs ago from United States

Your welcome

Tr0n1ka

Tr0n1ka 4 yrs ago from United States

I love these!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you Gwen.

helica444

helica444 4 yrs ago from Serbia

ooooh that's nasty
like the comic xd

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you. Glad you like it.

Created

Created 4 yrs ago from Netherlands

PLOT TWIST

Amazing as always.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you.

Yuki Karasu

Yuki Karasu 4 yrs ago from United States

XD Well I hope you have a car. . .

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

I hope he stole Shawn's car keys, else he is doomed in the blizzard.

Yuki Karasu

Yuki Karasu 4 yrs ago from United States

I know right? XD

Spacekat

Spacekat 4 yrs ago from United States

Pffft

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks!

Spacekat

Spacekat 4 yrs ago from United States

Remind me to vote for this on the seventh, okay?

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Sure and Zi is really thankful.

Spacekat

Spacekat 4 yrs ago from United States

Voted :)

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

omg! Zi is thankful a lot.

Spacekat

Spacekat 4 yrs ago from United States

:)

MadMic

MadMic 4 yrs ago from Malta

Well played Colin XD enjoy your frozen freedom

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

hahaha, well said.

Princesslovepink

Princesslovepink 4 yrs ago from United States

Colin is gonna die of hypothermia

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

true its a blizzard outside, but he is happy he could get out of the "cursed" place.

Princesslovepink

Princesslovepink 4 yrs ago from United States

I would've stayed till the blizzard was over and then get out

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

I guess Colin is not that smart!

Princesslovepink

Princesslovepink 4 yrs ago from United States

yeah

_Mirra_

_Mirra_ 4 yrs ago from United States

Oh...that's terrifying.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

yep, now he is stuck there until someone shows up, to take his place.

Murosaki

Murosaki 4 yrs ago from Malta

oh my that poor guy xD

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

only if he knew about the "cursed" pitstop, he would have rather spent the night in his car, lol.

Chase Hunter

Chase Hunter 4 yrs ago from Canada

Oh gosh......that's what he meant! Let's hope someone stops by soon!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Yep, the pit stop demands a care taker. Lets hope someone comes soon and he doesnt have to wait for 15 years like Colin.

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