Zi Brown

The Envelope

by Zi Brown

Creative Commons Tuesday November 17, 2015

857 views | 108 comments

Filed in Horror & Drama

Yes sir.

Are you the local errand boy?

Sure sir.

Deliver this envelope to the slaughterhouse, and you'll receive a silver coin when you get there.

Attaboy

This must be a really important note for someone willing to pay a silver coin for a simple errand.

I wish I could read whats written in this note... Reading is a luxury that I can never afford. Atleast, I wouldn't go to bed hungry tonight.

SLAUGHTERHOUSE

Alas, I've reached.

* knock knock *

What?

I was to deliver this envelope here, mister.

Here's the veal.

Yes sir. | Are you the local errand boy? Sure sir. | Deliver this envelope to the slaughterhouse, and you'll receive a silver coin when you get there. Attaboy This must be a really important note for someone willing to pay a silver coin for a simple errand. I wish I could read whats written in this note... Reading is a luxury that I can never afford. Atleast, I wouldn't go to bed hungry tonight. SLAUGHTERHOUSE | Alas, I've reached. * knock knock * What? | I was to deliver this envelope here, mister. Here's the veal.

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Zi Brown

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108 comments | 38 people | 5 languages | 16 countries

Danae.

Danae. 4 yrs ago from United States

Why did I have this feeling? ;-;

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

oops!

sam19

sam19 4 yrs ago from Spain

Geez, I'm soo shocked I don't even know what to think... But the story is soooo cool.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you so much.

Rigo's comix

Rigo's comix 4 yrs ago from Indonesia

*gasps in shock and isn't sure if she's frightened or in awe of your comic*

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you so much for your wonderful comment.

1000things

1000things 4 yrs ago from India

I am curious about what goes on in your head.....awesome twist...a question though why veal and not lamb?

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thank you for the question. I believe that in the Victorian era they gave more preference to veal as compared to lamb.

My mind is a twisted mess. lol.

Follow me down the rabbit hole. (brownie points to guess where his metaphor came from)

1000things

1000things 4 yrs ago from India

Alice?

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

hahaha yes!

10 points to Gryffindor.

1000things

1000things 4 yrs ago from India

Gosh...u lost me there

1000things

1000things 4 yrs ago from India

Alright just googled :)

Turboabueloagus

Turboabueloagus 4 yrs ago from Spain

Uuuuuuuh coooooooool~~

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you.

what_a_story

what_a_story 4 yrs ago from Poland

... and the butcher takes an axe and hauls off to hit the boy but he dodges and the axe sinks in the villain's shoulder who happens to appear just behind the boy's back because he wanted to check if his parcel has successfully delivered itself .... :)

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Wow, that is the best ending!

You can make a second part of this if you wish, i would be excited to see it.

what_a_story

what_a_story 4 yrs ago from Poland

if you'd be so kind to borrow me your skill and experience and maybe the extra software ... why not :) ... for now, I cede the copyright laws for this ending on your behalf :)

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Dude, I am flattered. But, I think you'd do better justice to ending of this series than me. You should give it a try.

siregalahad

siregalahad 4 yrs ago from United States

Scary!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you.

Yuki Karasu

Yuki Karasu 4 yrs ago from United States

O.O So good, but so /creepy/. . .. Love it.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you.

Yuki Karasu

Yuki Karasu 4 yrs ago from United States

Welcome!

Kittyscore

Kittyscore 4 yrs ago from United States

I don't know why, but somehow I knew that at the moment the kid was asked to deliver a letter to an slaughter house, I just knew that it was a death trap. LOL!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

The person who made him deliver the envelope looked kinda sly, ins't it?

Kittyscore

Kittyscore 4 yrs ago from United States

That and it was suspicious about how the boy was given a letter to deliver to an SLAUGHTER house. I guess because I saw some horror games and movies that takes place in or around a slaughter house.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

you are too cool.

mr.Trouble

mr.Trouble 4 yrs ago from Europe

oh sh-

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks.

aisha12

aisha12 4 yrs ago from United States

Wow I can't wait for the next issue

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks Aisha.

aisha12

aisha12 4 yrs ago from United States

Your welcome Zi

willcoloff

willcoloff 4 yrs ago from United States

hmmmm i think this is more funny than scary, unless its a crazed bucher

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Yes its a crazed butcher in the last panel.

willcoloff

willcoloff 4 yrs ago from United States

o_o oh... ok.............. *slowly backs out of room*

AJ-Ka

AJ-Ka 4 yrs ago from United States

Reading is a great skill to have.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Zi agrees. Thanks.

Louise91330

Louise91330 4 yrs ago from France

it's funny xDD

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

why is this funny?

Louise91330

Louise91330 4 yrs ago from France


I do not know if I'm sadistic or anything but the last box I actually did laugh!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

oooh!

Louise91330

Louise91330 4 yrs ago from France

x)

cleolo

cleolo 4 yrs ago from Belgium

Excellent !! xD

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you.

cleolo

cleolo 4 yrs ago from Belgium

Your welcome :3

CharlieBabu

CharlieBabu 4 yrs ago from United States

Wow ! ready for the next one !

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you.

CharlieBabu

CharlieBabu 4 yrs ago from United States

your welcome

Chase Hunter

Chase Hunter 4 yrs ago from Canada

Oh....*anticipated the kid's fate* wow....unexpected! XD

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks Chase.

EisCube007

EisCube007 4 yrs ago from United States

hahahaha that was well worth the wait.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks mastah.

EisCube007

EisCube007 4 yrs ago from United States

welcome, it had me giggling for a while.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

why?? O.O

EisCube007

EisCube007 4 yrs ago from United States

cuz I'm a deeply disturbed little boy...

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

O.O

EisCube007

EisCube007 4 yrs ago from United States

lol you act like this is new news..

mzazngirl

mzazngirl 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

I did not expect that Zi, RUN ERRAND BOY RUN

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Arigatou Senpai.

shall Zi make more of these short stories?

Baldur is a sheep

Baldur is a sheep 4 yrs ago from Denmark

did you try to make a horror story or a love story i dont really see whats scary

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

did you understand the ending?

Baldur is a sheep

Baldur is a sheep 4 yrs ago from Denmark

yeah the kiddo i about to get murdered and eaten up by a cannibal right?

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

yes. so how do i make this comic better? How can i not make it look like a love story?

Baldur is a sheep

Baldur is a sheep 4 yrs ago from Denmark

dosent matter at least somebody TRIED

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

but what made you think this looks like a love story? at least give me some feedback.

Baldur is a sheep

Baldur is a sheep 4 yrs ago from Denmark

well nice shading and stuff

Created

Created 4 yrs ago from Netherlands

Wow! Very well made!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks dude.

Georgy Girl

Georgy Girl 4 yrs ago from United Kingdom

Yikes... never expected that! Super job, Zi, and terrific characters.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you. Zi is happy you like it.

Tr0n1ka

Tr0n1ka 4 yrs ago from United States

Oh...my 0_0

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you.

After Death

After Death 4 yrs ago from United States

Oh no! This is such a terrifying story! You did great at telling it!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you.

Elina.

Elina. 4 yrs ago from France

Oh gosh. I love this story. Nicely illustrated Zi !

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you.

Princesslovepink

Princesslovepink 4 yrs ago from United States

Oooh little boy is meeting Barry

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

whose Barry?

Princesslovepink

Princesslovepink 4 yrs ago from United States

The chopper

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Yep.

Princesslovepink

Princesslovepink 4 yrs ago from United States

Poor kid

SweetAnnabel

SweetAnnabel 4 yrs ago from Netherlands

Oh god

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you.

Murosaki

Murosaki 4 yrs ago from Malta

That dude was so creepy Oh gosh

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Arigatou Senpai.

_Andre_

_Andre_ 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

All the red in the comic... It's so shocking but interesting. O-O,

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you.

_Mirra_

_Mirra_ 4 yrs ago from United States

Ooooh scary :o Great job, Zi!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

thank you Mirra.

MP3artistic

MP3artistic 4 yrs ago from Mexico

OMG...NO please NO! Dx
But it looks beautiful and detailed love it/shocking!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thank you.

MP3artistic

MP3artistic 4 yrs ago from Mexico

Are you going to continue? Or is this just suspense? xD

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

nope, its a short story. I leave it on the readers to assume what could have happened next.

Shall i maek more of these shorts?

MP3artistic

MP3artistic 4 yrs ago from Mexico

Yes please! While I try to imagine a happy ending for my buddy here!

Percy Epsilon

Percy Epsilon 4 yrs ago from Canada

Oh gosh, its so horrible to do such a thing >.< But I love the way you illustrated it,Zi . Great job! *claps*

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks u, Percy!

Horizoncomix

Horizoncomix 4 yrs ago from Australia

ATTABOY xD

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

I do not own the story. I came across this story on internet.

Thank you all authors for the amazing community props.

Hope you all like this short story. Feel free to rate and comment.

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