Zi Brown

The Midnight Shoppe

by Zi Brown

Creative Commons Friday November 27, 2015

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Filed in Relationships & Drama

I guess Amy is again suffering from insomnia. She is so beautiful, yet so fragile.

Its almost midnight. I must trail her, like I do every night. Its my duty to protect my girlfriend.

I think her wandering has a purpose today. She is looking for something.

The Midnight Shoppe. I swear she came here for the first time.

SEVERAL MINUTES LATER

I wonder what she purchased. I must investigate the shop.

inside the midnight shoppe

Can I help you?

Just looking! Not sure what I want.

The Shoppe sells what you need, not what you want.

Oh really! And what do I need?

Empty Soda cans?

This

No string required

One to keep, and one to share. But the Shoppe says be very careful to whom you entrust it.

The next morning

Glad you could come today Amy! I have a gift for you.

First, I have something for you.

few hours later

OMG! Where am I? How did I get here?

Amy......can you hear me?

"Amy, please answer me..."

YES! Leave me alone...you Yandere...

But...You’re my girlfriend... I thought we could....

I’m NOT your girlfriend! I’ve never been your girlfriend! But you wouldn’t stop stalking me.

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Zi Brown

Zi Brown

I'm from Location Unknown.
Joined May 2, 2014
331 comics published

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Shiny soda can - pop
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Japanese Woman
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Chinese Wine bottle
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King Tut sarcophagus
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IamMia-chan

IamMia-chan 4 yrs ago from Bosnia and Herzegovina

What?

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

yes

Ruquistrukiz

Ruquistrukiz 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

I couldn´t understand it :/

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

the guy was following that girl everywhere and he deemed her to be his girlfriend, without her consent. The girl was fed up with him and hence she made a plan to get rid of him. She purchased a spade from the midnight shoppe to knock him down, while he purchased a soda can to communicate his feelings to her. When she called him to meet in the outskirts of the town, she hit his head with the spade and buried him alive. Because of the magical cans they could still communicate and she told him that because he was a stalker she did this to him.

Ruquistrukiz

Ruquistrukiz 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

:O OHHHH ok good job! ;D

Rigo's comix

Rigo's comix 4 yrs ago from Indonesia

Awesome I boosted it! Love the "Twisted Tales" series!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you so so much. it means a lot to me. i feel so much acknowledged.

Percy Epsilon

Percy Epsilon 4 yrs ago from Canada

HAH! Looooove this! But MAN, that lady needs to just chill! XD Either way, epicly put together, Zi ;)

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you dude.

I guess, Amy was too frustrated with him following her everywhere.

what_a_story

what_a_story 4 yrs ago from Poland

Oh, so the shopkeeper knew what tools they would need. Was he involved in this plot or he rather played a role of a Chinese fortune teller?

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

He was merely a fortune teller. As a Shoppe owner he always made sure everyone get what they need the most.

In Amy's case, it was the shovel.

In the yandere's case it was the soda cans.

PS: if you notice Amy just drops the soda can near his "grave". The yandere is still hopeful that he might get rescued.

rou0111a

rou0111a 4 yrs ago from Serbia

WOW cool comic!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you.

x_Rowan_x

x_Rowan_x 4 yrs ago from United Kingdom

Cool comic! That woman is strange :/

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

haha, yes, she is more frustrated with the stalker, i assume.

x_Rowan_x

x_Rowan_x 4 yrs ago from United Kingdom

That's what I was confused about. Is he a stalker, or are they together but she's crazy?

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

he is a stalker. She is not crazy.

Spacekat

Spacekat 4 yrs ago from United States

Wow what a twist!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you.

Spacekat

Spacekat 4 yrs ago from United States

:)

aisha12

aisha12 4 yrs ago from United States

I love the twisted tales Zi. Your awesome :)

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you Aisha. You are awesomer.

aisha12

aisha12 4 yrs ago from United States

awww thanks but your so much better :)

AJ-Ka

AJ-Ka 4 yrs ago from United States

And that's how you deal with yanderes Just bury them alive. xD
Love to see how yanderes think. Great story Sir Zi!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you sir jh55555.

-Kate-

-Kate- 4 yrs ago from United States

I love these twisted tales of yours, Zi! There is always a plot twist that is sure to make surprise you!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you Kate. you are a great motivator.

1000things

1000things 4 yrs ago from India

Absolute fun read....loved the story n twist!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thank you so much.

Georgy Girl

Georgy Girl 4 yrs ago from United Kingdom

I guess the shopkeeper was right , he did need those cans. Ha... great job, ZI.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

hahaha, Thanks you so much.

AmericanRivers

AmericanRivers 4 yrs ago from United States

If only he'd given the cup to someone else...Haha! Another great twist, Zi!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

hahaha, Thanks you.

Amy threw the can near his "grave" rather than destroying it. i guess he still has some hope, if someone else finds it, before its too late.

Yuki Karasu

Yuki Karasu 4 yrs ago from United States

:3 I like this one, a lot.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you.

Yuki Karasu

Yuki Karasu 4 yrs ago from United States

:)

Created

Created 4 yrs ago from Netherlands

Oh you. You keep surprising me with plot twists every time. HOW DO YOU KEEP DOING THIS?!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you dude.

I am a fan of plot twists kinda stories so I try to share them with you all.

Great Frost Hawk

Great Frost Hawk 4 yrs ago from United States

I kinda smelled something fishy about that guy from the second panel.

Another short story well done, Zi!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you GFH.

Great Frost Hawk

Great Frost Hawk 4 yrs ago from United States

Of course!

Queen.Taylor

Queen.Taylor 4 yrs ago from United States

Saw that coming.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

hue hue hue

Queen.Taylor

Queen.Taylor 4 yrs ago from United States

Omigod ur just like my boyfriend. He says Hue all the time!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

LOL, giv him a fist bump from Zi.

Queen.Taylor

Queen.Taylor 4 yrs ago from United States

Absolutely.

_Mirra_

_Mirra_ 4 yrs ago from United States

Oh interesting. I was in favour of the guy for a bit, but I had a feeling he was a creep :p

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks Mirra. Yes, he is a creep. Do you think, Amy did the right thing?

_Mirra_

_Mirra_ 4 yrs ago from United States

If he's a yandere like she says, then it probably is for the best. (But she should've hidden the second can :x)

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

oh yes, that was a better idea hiding the second can. He still has some hope left...oops.

MadMic

MadMic 4 yrs ago from Malta

Well that's one way to deal with a stalker

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

she had no other option, i guess.

TeddyPolaBear

TeddyPolaBear 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

That's one... twisted tale...

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you.

siregalahad

siregalahad 4 yrs ago from United States

Very Twilight Zone.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you.

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