Zi Brown

Urban Twist

by Zi Brown

Creative Commons Thursday March 31, 2016

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Filed in Horror & Comedy

This way please.

Master Brown is awaiting you in his study chamber.

Welcome Jirachi !

You've got quite a nerve summoning me at such an unholy hour.

So...dont you wanna hear the next Twisted Tale??

um..well, yes!

This one is called the "Urban Twist"...

BULLS EYE

...Driving on the highway late at night, Rick's hunger led him to a seluded food joint.

FAST FOOD

I love the food...its magical..your chef is a genius.

He conveys his liking of the food to the waitress.

We do have a great chef, but the real magic lies in the source of the food.

Wait! I sensed the twist here...

She served him a human being, didn't she?

Hah! No she didn't!

Would'nt that be toooo predictable?

Jirachi-: DUH! please continue.

So where do you source your ingredients from?

Talking about the source...

We grow them ourselves. We even raise our own farm animals.

My etiquettes compel me to meet and compliment the chef.

Rick was eager to meet the chef.

s..s..Sure!

Meet Drake, our head chef.

The Chef was summoned at once.

He has worked with a lot of master chefs and has lapped their talents.

Happy to meet you Chef Drake!

I just wanna know the secret to your awesome food.

My secret?

I sing while cooking...hehe

I am sure there is something else... Please chef...tell me..

Singing?

Rick probed further...

Chef Drake was about to reveal his biggest secret...

Okay, I'll tell you the truth...

hahaha...nope!

She served him a human being, didn't she?

Magic..he mixed magical potions in the food..

*Monosodium glutamate (MSG) is the sodium salt of glutamic acid. it is a flavor enhancer.

I use a lot of MSG*

That was the most horrible twist.

WHAT ?

She served him a human being, didn't she?

Know what? Thank you for wasting my time. I am leaving this creepfest of a mansion.

Telling these stories always makes me hungry!

She served him a human being, didn't she?

Know what?

Here's the link to share this comic:

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71 comments | 28 people | 3 languages | 10 countries

fluo

fluo 4 yrs ago from France

xDDDD

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks!

mr.Trouble

mr.Trouble 4 yrs ago from Europe

i cant believe i have to kinkshame you zi

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Its a proud moment

~le wipes tear of joy~

mr.Trouble

mr.Trouble 4 yrs ago from Europe

X'D

Baldur is a sheep

Baldur is a sheep 4 yrs ago from Denmark

ziiiii nuuuhhhh

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

LOL

CarloMama

CarloMama 4 yrs ago from United States

I like how u made the mansion nice
;0

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you Carlo.

Rigo's comix

Rigo's comix 4 yrs ago from Indonesia

Zi... I donno what to say. It's vry unusually... creepy. You re not a zombie right?

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

haha, Thanks you Rigo.

you have to do a team comic with me to find that out..lol.

Rigo's comix

Rigo's comix 4 yrs ago from Indonesia

YES!!!!!!!!!!!

AJ-Ka

AJ-Ka 4 yrs ago from United States

Oh no not MSG! D:

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

jajajaja

Elina.

Elina. 4 yrs ago from France

Nooo Jira-chan D:
That was a veery good twist haha xD

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

merci Elina.

Jira senpai is safe...jajajaja

what_a_story

what_a_story 4 yrs ago from Poland

Awsome. I liked the graphics and narration. Didn' he want to cook her after telling his previous stories? It looks like it's not Jirachi's first visit?

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you so very much. I was so looking forward for your comment.

Hah! you always interpret things the right way! but how?

yes it wasnt her first visit as she didnt show any signs of fear. and the last panel was more of a threat due to her not liking the story...lol

it was fun to have Jirachi on the team.

what_a_story

what_a_story 4 yrs ago from Poland

Yeah, ok, I got it! Still quite surprising and original ending which gives the anticipated thrill and makes the overall effect so much stronger.

mzazngirl

mzazngirl 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

I was not expecting that xD Damn that was a good twist!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Arigatou Senpai.

[samuel]

[samuel] 4 yrs ago from New Zealand

that twist >^<

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

hehe, thanks Sam.

princesa.sanai

princesa.sanai 4 yrs ago from United States

May I help with the next one please?

princesa.sanai

princesa.sanai 4 yrs ago from United States

This is truly awesome. xD

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

sure! will invite you soon :))

Thanks you for reading.

Danae.

Danae. 4 yrs ago from United States

woow Zi. Just wow.

xD

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you.

Ruquistrukiz

Ruquistrukiz 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

You are a cannibal, Zi xD

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

just like Kaneki Ken :P :P :P

Ruquistrukiz

Ruquistrukiz 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

You are a bad guy >:D

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

appreciate the compliment ;D

Ruquistrukiz

Ruquistrukiz 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Spoiler Alert: See my comics; they are on Spanish but I hope you like them ;D

Doodle Devil

Doodle Devil 4 yrs ago from United States

Ooh, named after one of my favorite Pokemon. ^_^

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

which one is your fave pokemon?

Doodle Devil

Doodle Devil 4 yrs ago from United States

Oh gosh, you can't make me choose just one.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

omg,mine too.

Baldur is a sheep

Baldur is a sheep 4 yrs ago from Denmark

OKAY MAYBE I DONT WANNA TEAM COMIC WITH YOU ANYMORE... (pls don't eat me...)

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

hahaha, this made my day. you're so funny Sebestian.

Baldur is a sheep

Baldur is a sheep 4 yrs ago from Denmark

my name is baldur. sebastian is my (i dunno what to call it becauseim not that good at english) name

_Mirra_

_Mirra_ 4 yrs ago from United States

OH NO xD

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

lol

Thanks you Mirra.

Georgy Girl

Georgy Girl 4 yrs ago from United Kingdom

Aaaggh... the dreaded MSG ( Most Sordid Gimmick). Super settings and scenes too!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Thanks you so much.

Most Sorded Gimmick is an attribute of this comic. hahaha.

-Kate-

-Kate- 4 yrs ago from United States

Hahaha! My dad is intolerant to MSG.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

omg!

Thanks you Kate.

aisha12

aisha12 4 yrs ago from United States

Sooo many frightening scene s

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

LOL!

Thanks Aisha.

aisha12

aisha12 4 yrs ago from United States

^^ your welcome Zi

_Andre_

_Andre_ 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

Talking 'bout food... What were you expecting Zi?

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

haha, you r right!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

nom nom nom..mmm delicious

Great Frost Hawk

Great Frost Hawk 4 yrs ago from United States

So many twists!

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

hue hue hue

Thanks Frost.

AmericanRivers

AmericanRivers 4 yrs ago from United States

That was quite cute, The MGS bit is pretty funny.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

hehe, Thanks you.

Apricity

Apricity 4 yrs ago from United States

thanks.

Zi Brown

Zi Brown 4 yrs ago from Location Unknown

you're welcome Aqua. Hope we can work in future :)))

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