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...It began with some strange mail being delivered.

LONDON

amongst the normal pile of bills and final demands, was a tacky looking postcard.

IT said something like:

i didn't think much of it at the time, apart from the curious use of words, and the fact that no-one called diana lives in my building, let alone my apartment.

Dearest Diana, it seems like only yesterday I was waving you off to your new life in America. I trust Hermes got you there in one piece? Wish you were back here with me in the shadow of Belanos! lots of love, Snuggles. xxxx

my good deed had me rushing to get to the subway on time though,

there was a return address, so rather than searching for a miscellaneous diana, i sent the card back to "snuggles" the very next day.

and in my haste, i collided face first into a steel pole!

CRAANG

hah! what a coincedence!

even through the ego denting throb of pain in my face i remember thinking:

Come To

Come To

Britain.

when the first show i came across that evening on the tv was talking about going to england, i started to question what was going on.

this is getting .....odd.

...but if you want to try real cheddar cheese, you must travel to england, to the somerset town from which it takes it's name....

...YOu cross...

...mighty ocean...

...far, far away...

...The English men fo...

my head swam as a heady mixture of confusion, fear and excitement washed over me.

!?

...fought bravely, but they were no match for the American sol...

...and that was just the first day, by the end of the week my whole belief system was shattered!

You see! it's so obvious! this whole universe is alive! alive and drenched in fascination! we must follow this bunny to the depths of wonderland my friend.....

...England, here we come!

...It began with some strange mail being delivered. | LONDON | amongst the normal pile of bills and final demands, was a tacky looking postcard. Fuente(s) de imagen(es)images.jpg
IT said something like: | i didn't think much of it at the time, apart from the curious use of words, and the fact that no-one called diana lives in my building, let alone my apartment. | Dearest Diana, it seems like only yesterday I was waving you off to your new life in America. I trust Hermes got you there in one piece? Wish you were back here with me in the shadow of Belanos! lots of love, Snuggles. xxxx my good deed had me rushing to get to the subway on time though, | there was a return address, so rather than searching for a miscellaneous diana, i sent the card back to "snuggles" the very next day. | and in my haste, i collided face first into a steel pole! CRAANG
hah! what a coincedence! | even through the ego denting throb of pain in my face i remember thinking: | Come  To | Come  To | Britain. | Britain. | You'll ruddy love it. We think. | i'm not so sure i even believe in the concept of "coincidence" any more. Fuente(s) de imagen(es)union-jack-flag-nylon-3678-p.gif
when the first show i came across that evening on the tv was talking about going to england, i started to question what was going on. | this is getting .....odd. | ...but if you want to try real cheddar cheese, you must travel to england, to the somerset town from which it takes it's name.... ...YOu cross... ...mighty ocean... ...far, far away... ...The English men fo... my head swam as a heady mixture of confusion, fear and excitement washed over me. | !? | ...fought bravely, but they were no match for the American sol... ...and that was just the first day, by the end of the week my whole belief system was shattered! | You see! it's so obvious! this whole universe is alive! alive and drenched in fascination! we must follow this bunny to the depths of wonderland my friend..... ...England, here we come!

19 comentarios | 10 personas | 2 idiomas | 6 países

frank13
frank13 Hace 2 años de Australia

cool comic plz come and comment and rate my first comic :first day at school thx

ItsJustEva(:
ItsJustEva(: Hace 2 años de Países Bajos

yes, Mealisa is right! You can put a long speech into 4 or 5 comics, cause the 2nd frame is a bit boring with the long speech...

thoughty winks
thoughty winks Hace 2 años de United Kingdom

part 4 is online now :)

Mealisa
Mealisa Hace 2 años de Canadá

Hey! I read all your comics, and they are awesome! Little word of advice though, don't put long speech bubbles, make them into short speech bubbles and spread them out not in one panel but in many. It's easier for readers to read, and attracts them to read it too. But really, this series is a work of art, keep going!

thoughty winks
thoughty winks Hace 2 años de United Kingdom

thanks for the tip! i'll keep that in mind, although i just published part 4 and there is a few long bits in there, didn't see your message in time. thanks for the compliments too :D

supernaturaltoe
supernaturaltoe Hace 2 años de Nueva Zelanda

This is some well-crafted goodness right here!

thoughty winks
thoughty winks Hace 2 años de United Kingdom

thanks man, your stuff is hilarious as well :)

supernaturaltoe
supernaturaltoe Hace 2 años de Nueva Zelanda

Why, thank you! ♥

supernaturaltoe
supernaturaltoe Hace 2 años de Nueva Zelanda

Also, have you considered making a comic book for this series? It deserves one! http://www.pixton.com/create/comic/format/book

thoughty winks
thoughty winks Hace 2 años de United Kingdom

i did think about it, i think i will when its finished, it may be a bit odd because of the cliffhanger format and each one is a different length. when this story arc is done i'll make a compilation :)

Georgy Girl
Georgy Girl Hace 2 años de Canadá

With so many choices in life, it seems as good a way as any to make decisions! Excellent narrative!

thoughty winks
thoughty winks Hace 2 años de United Kingdom

thanks for your feedback guys, much appreciated, glad you're enjoying reading as much as i enjoy writing it!

thoughty winks
thoughty winks Hace 2 años de United Kingdom

thanks :)

Black Sheep
Black Sheep Hace 2 años de Grecia

It's pretty exciting ;)

Jonnyonekenobi
Jonnyonekenobi Hace 2 años de United Kingdom

getting exciting now :)

mamamanga
mamamanga Hace 2 años de Canadá

The reason I looked at this was the flag.... then intrigued by the script. Well done

thoughty winks
thoughty winks Hace 2 años de United Kingdom

thankyou mamamanga! this is part 3, did you read the first 2 parts? it's going to be a continuing series :)

mamamanga
mamamanga Hace 2 años de Canadá

I plan to read them soon - should do it before the series becomes 15-20 parts, eh (wink)

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